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Pixie Sticks, For Heaven's Sake

I heard a fellow poet exclaim
that he could not bear another poem
about this blasted pandemic.
Not another, he had exclaimed again.
He asked if someone could please,
please,
write about something, anything else,
that doesn't confine the written word
to this poetry-inspiring pandemic.
Someone please, he had said,
write about
"...pixie sticks, for heaven's sake."

And so, to the frustrated, but lovely poet,
whom I hope has survived these months
ingesting and digesting pandemic-free
but more than likely, calorie-filled poetry,
I offer my verse:

Pixie Sticks

In general,
sugar-bombs
in a straw dressed
like a barber's pole.
Sweet like a puffed-up lie
to a narcissistic ear,
sour like a guttering promise
thrown out in the heat.

I peel the top off
a Blue Maui Punch
and pour the excitement
onto my eager tongue,
wondering what adventure
this day will bring.

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hi, Jerry

This was a random remark I read on a social media forum from a poet I do not know nor correspond with - and the point that was of interest to me was the request for a poem about anything, like - Pixie Sticks! I could not pass up the request. I did not know of your discontent, and in turn, hope I don't offend anyone.
Thank you so much for reading!
L

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c lynn brooks

4 years 10 months ago

lavender

send that person to my profile I too am tired of seeing covid poems
Pixie sticks oh yes I remember them so well what was I thinking back then lol

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hello, Chrys

I thought the request for poetry about pixie sticks was too fun and interesting, and it actually brought back a few fond childhood memories - all the pure sugar and horrible food coloring!
Thank you for your comments!
L

Geezer

Geezer

4 years 10 months ago

Yeah...

Pixie-Styx! I loved those damned things. I suppose that they or something very much like them are still around, since mankind still has the proverbial sweet-tooth. Yes, very good preamble too. Oh Damn, I just loved the whole thing. ~ Geez.
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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hi, Mark

True - at least for a bit. (sigh) Next poem: Sweet Tarts!
Thank you!
L

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hi, Geezer

Is the name Sticks, or Styx...er, maybe is it Stix? I scratch my head. But such a fun, tasty topic. Thank you for reading and indulging with me!
L

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hello, Teddy

Sugar Bombs! I think we had those, too! Thank you so much for reading, Teddy!
L

T

tyro

4 years 10 months ago

The poem is entertaining, a

The poem is entertaining, a bit offbeat. I especially liked your sweet and sour similes. the last two lines added extra flavor to the poem with its mind set.

Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Hello, T

A bit offbeat is a good description! Thank you very much for reading!
L