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Jan 06, 2013
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PLAY MISTY FOR ME
PLAY MISTY FOR ME
In a mist of mushroom gray
swirls of yellow play
their yellow mellow melodies.
and in a sea of poppy red
I contemplate when I’ll be dead
but I’m so stoned
it matters not
Pass the hookah and the pot.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 6 months ago
Joe
I love it ... It has a feel all its own
Nice work
Bravo
It creates ambiance
Love your jayne xxxx
Geremia
12 years 6 months ago
Thanks, my Jane. Too bad the
Thanks, my Jane. Too bad the"stuff' doesn't wrk. lol
Jenifer James
12 years 6 months ago
Very cool. Made me laugh.
Very cool. Made me laugh.
Geremia
12 years 6 months ago
I'm glad. I needed some
I'm glad. I needed some coomic relief. My poetry canbe intense.
Geremia
12 years 6 months ago
Thanks, my friend. Seems
Thanks, my friend. Seems unlike what I usually write, but humor reveals at times much more than it says.
loved
12 years 6 months ago
I love the mist of Niagra Falls
and AVERY HAPPY NEW YEAR
to you
my mystic friend ........
live a long and fruitful life
let us share
your glare
the poetic world would become a dwarf
without you
and
so don't dare!
hang on as far as its long enough
none know that yet ...
how long....
all simply bluff
the heaven and hell are only here
who else in the hell does care
so live on a bit longer
and death you must
finally dare
Geremia
12 years 6 months ago
There are days i don;t feel
There are days i don;t feel my inevitabikity; but when the sickness suddenly hits you, you despair,
loved
12 years 6 months ago
despair not friend
read my poem
and
MEDITATE
that's one way
guys told me 19 years ago...
I'd die in three months at the most...
I assure you its I...
not my ghost