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Jan 09, 2022
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"Plugging In..." Random Challenge/I Need To Recharge
Find an empty charging port
Get your plug inserted
You better be quick about it
You need to be concerted
You should keep an eye out
Watch your failing charge
Because, it's hard to find a charging port
In a city that's this large
Keep your charging apparatus
With you at all times
Make sure you are at ready
Keep them in your head like rhymes
Don't get caught with your battery down
Watch the energy you have left
Or you may lose your big connection
And find yourself bereft
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Jackweb
3 years 5 months ago
Gee... looms again
Here the Master dribbles with alternate rhymes and brings the beauty of his art in his choice of words.