Rula

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Poe-tree

If roses were poems
would they bloom
poetic blossoms
with anodyne rhymes,
and ambrosian perfumes?

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just a thought. Silly?

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

raj

7 years 3 months ago

Hi Rula

nice thought provocative mini poem...in my opinion you may see if it works better by deleting "what" in L2 and move the question mark at the end....just my thought...
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Rula

7 years 3 months ago

Much better

dear raj.
Much appreciate the read and your talented thought to ameliorate this mini poetic thought.
Thank you.

raj

7 years 3 months ago

good to know Rula that the

good to know Rula that the suggestion worked for you...forgot to mention in the previous comment on how nicely you have created the title...

now coming back to the question

If roses were poems......?

i can only say you have taken me on another thought wave...
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Rula

7 years 3 months ago

Thank you raj

It's always good to know that you've been an inspiration to others.
Always curious to see how should others think about the same title/theme...etc.
Isn't that wonderful?

scribbler

7 years 3 months ago

Hi Rula

They' be so only
if written well
those written badly
would surely smell...............stan

Rula

7 years 3 months ago

Haha

absolutely!

raj

7 years 3 months ago

perhaps one of the poems the

perhaps one of the poems the roses would bloom could be

see me, touch me, feel me
don't pluck me
inhale my essence
"live, let live
life is vulnerable
make most of it
rise above thorns
be dignified"

--Ms. Rose
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Rula

7 years 3 months ago

Awesome

with a crystal clear message there.
I love everything about roses.

raj

7 years 3 months ago

rosy poem # 2

I'm a fashionable girl
wearing frocks in ethnic colors
seducing bees and butterflies
they flirt, kiss, tap dance
get hooked on my honey
keep returning for more
Alas! if they had noses
would get mesmerized
by my intimate aroma

...Ms. Rose
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Rula

7 years 3 months ago

lovely!

who said that roses aren't the most beautiful thing.
Thank you for sharing your rich rosy thoughts raj.

lovedly

7 years 3 months ago

If I was a poet tree I'd compose at least three

poet tree 1

Roses we love
as roses symbolize
last word above
give me a rose
and say
which girl does not
with Lovedly want to play
a game of Love
lol
lovely display

poet tree 2

shall add more
if only Rula does agree
why in the storm
bash her poets greenery

poetry 3...
is in the thinking
will ink it at the appropriate time
yes but naturally timely