Thanks for the read. Actually I had contemplated on lines suggested by you and have now replaced "their" with but and "a" with "their". Does "their" communicate the expected meaning ?

Regards,

judyanne

10 years 4 months ago

depends on what you are meaning raj

For me 'to' seems to say more
I cant explain why - it may be just the way I see it, but it changes the meaning very subtly

Read it a few times over, trying out both 'their' and 'to', and see if you can see what I mean ...
love judy
xxx

raj

10 years 4 months ago

Judyanne

I know what you mean. But I feel that in the absence of "their" somewhere, it would not connect "words" to "thought"...i hope you know what i mean.

Regards,

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

great imagination

you link poetry with vibrations only
what of words
all seek
the same dictionary
raj sublime _ u b

wesley snow

10 years 4 months ago

I resonate with "to".

It not only broadens the comment, but it sounds better grammatically.

raj

10 years 4 months ago

Lovedly & Wesley

Thanks for stopping by, your read and comments.

Regards,

Sparrow

10 years 4 months ago

raj

A polished piece with the small changes that you accepted.
A great piece for today, take care,
Yours Ian..

raj

10 years 4 months ago

Hi Ian

Thanks,

Regards,

Seren

9 years 4 months ago

Its all been said before me

Its all been said before me but this verges onto the profound

Beautifully done and oh it really is !! A poem ;)

Love and big hugs Jayne xxx

raj

9 years 4 months ago

Thanks Jayne for stopping by

Thanks Jayne for stopping by and dropping an appreciative comment, means a lot...

Warm regards,