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Nordic cloud
Nordic cloud
Jun 22, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

POETIC CONTACT

He held her like a poem,
a breath of words,
a body of thoughts,
sentiments expressed in subtle metaphors,
that drove his heart to beat faster ;
never to feel a warmth of hand, 
a breast;
imagined,
spun into fairy-tales, unreal. 

About This Poem

Last Few Words: They corresponded, but never actually met.

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 1 month ago

Ann

A lovely touchy feely piece that just made my memory spin,
Yours Ian.T

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

12 years ago

Thank you dear Rula,

Thank you dear Rula,
you sense the feeling behind the words well,
a breath away from reality, as one communicates
over the net, and there are many who do, I think!

Love Anna

loved

loved

12 years 1 month ago

You create thoughts

visions from your rife imagination ...single ones will love to share ....what you deem to create ...in the wildest of dreams they can't imagine ....how love can simply flow ....from a single thought ....and seed electric currents of such high voltage ....none can hope to have bought

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Geezer

Geezer

12 years ago

Yes, my Queen...

loneliness can bring two people together, even through thin air! Nice one, ~ Sir Gee

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

12 years ago

That's it, and enhance the

That's it, and enhance the drudge of silence
by being a voice from the wilderness,
as if on the wind, whispered and shouted with love.

Like some of my messages to my knights in armour,
I send thoughts, when they are in battle, and I feel
sure they know they are there?

Love from your Queenie, Ann.