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Mar 13, 2024
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Poetic Creations
It takes so long to let her live,
From way down deep, of herself, she shall give.
Innocent, unaware, helped with most care.
My love or my hell, to be done so well.
For weeks I sat and thought of her.
The words I write for her do say,
My love through night and through the day,
You surely live a lonely way.
Doubt and re-doubt.
Each line a part sought,
Each word carefully brought.
Thought and re-thought,
Taken to a whole,
Remains part of my soul.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
1 year 3 months ago
You sure do...
have a voice! It says volumes. An affirmation of love. Nicely done sir. ~ Geez.
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Lavender
1 year 3 months ago
Poetic Creations
Hello, Mark,
I can sense the need for the words to be precise and carefully chosen. A tender, thoughtful poem.
Thank you,
L
Michael Anthony
1 year 2 months ago
Congrats Marky-Mark! Best
Congrats Marky-Mark!
Best
mark
1 year 2 months ago
Hey Mikey Thanks
Mikey likes it!
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Geezer
1 year 2 months ago
Congratulations...
on your win! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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