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Jul 17, 2014
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Poetic Justification
indigo eye
cycloptic, myopic
as bloodshot veins collide in the center
of the heroine roadways
casting distance.....into distance
where summer green grasses smother rolling hills
giving way to plains of grain
swaying in the dry air
like 10,000 serpents
slithering in unison
Voices stem and argue
amidst a chorus of summer blues
until tongues collide, twist and
lock
in a passion
melting
in the well of a pen
that lies arthritic
on the desk in the den
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
10 years 11 months ago
A surrealist kind of poem.
A surrealist kind of poem.
Ann
eightmenout
10 years 11 months ago
Ann
Thanks for stopping by and having a read. I appreciate it.
Scott
Ian.T
10 years 11 months ago
8men
Liked this one, though just a twinge at the varying line lengths but they came out OK.
Staring into the open fields reminds me of wanting a freedom though not needing it, then returning to the daily run of things.
We are all guilty of pretence whether it is truth we run from or just a memory..
Keep well and write more,
Yours Ian.T
eightmenout
10 years 11 months ago
Ian
Thanks for stopping by. Appreciate it especially since I haven't been making many rounds of late.
Glad you liked it
Scott