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Poetry

Poetry is more than rhyme
Or words dictated by form
It is what we feel Inside
It’s our thoughts and feelings
About what we see
Put into images uniquely
Our own

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 3 months ago

So true...

but it helps to have good form and make it smooth. Then the emotions that we read are so much easier to feel, because then the reader isn't struggling to understand the meaning. Nicely done. ~ Geezer.
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Clentin

Clentin

2 years 3 months ago

Thank you.

Thank you.
You are right.
I try to use rhyme other forms.