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Jan 18, 2019
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POLLUTION POPULA-SHUN & POVERTY
These are normal
pollutants
now the world over
but see the positive side of it all
guess what lovedly has in mind
they say 2020 10 billions human
how will you feed?
so JESUS knew
well in advance
''THE MEEK WILL INHERIT THE EARTH'''
said He
MEEK IS NOT AFRAID ONES
but poor impoverished and weak
He meant hopefully
We all stand besides all humanity
don't we
such intelligent poetry
doesn't come easily
but rarely
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
You do write some gems
and unless I am missing some iron-fisted irony this is not one of them.
Your use of caps is gratuitous. I could go on at length at just how bad the poetry and ideas are but I am already quivering with rage.
If that was your intent your poem was a success, but a cheap shot.
I have deleted some of the worst vituperation
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
Thanx jess
this was a sequel to someone's content
Yes some aberrations exist will streamline some to create a gem
Else shall delete it will u give me time pl
Loved's salutations!
weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
yeah, I saw this as a comment on someone else's work
that's what made me so angry.
lovedly
6 years 6 months ago
reviewed jess
The meek shall inherit the Earth
meek is not afraid ones
but poor and weak
such intelligent poetry
scribbler
6 years 6 months ago
OK
I read it but it's 20clock at night and I'll have to get some shuteye before critique