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Mar 26, 2014
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pork aplomb
brittle star
reef dwelling armour
stud clamour minotaur
dinosaur silence scientists
endanger with saw scholastic
score sore densely hair
calcite carbide chemist
in mist mint dressed lamb lab
fibers febrile
the spiritual capacity of in-necessity
in vertebrae spinach brae hay
drear day play mast
pageant rise
ferocious that a mustang can kill
wheel meal that is all that meal
palm oil veal plangent tranquil
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i really think science lacks true answers to many phenomenons , even some that it originates especially that our hair and the stars cannot be numbered by even the most minute microscope
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 3 months ago
Emeka
Many readers are not in the frame of mind where your words could take them if they knew them all.
You have an extraordinary range of words, most of us will be into looking many of them up, but this is what your works should be doing in extended lines, where you give those words a body of sound that will touch the reader.
What can I say other than Simplify your message,
Yours as always Ian.T