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Mar 02, 2018
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Pot melting?
From all the places
An ethnic stew of faces
New castes of races
— OriginalRhyku, Mar 02, 2018
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Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Polished draft
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Cloudthings
7 years 2 months ago
It really does have an appeal
Not sure if any critique is needed here - so simply, it says what it needs to!
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