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Jul 24, 2011
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A Pot of Stew
A pot of stew for you to chew
includes a boot to kick ur a^^
Not enough knives, for ur demise
And a hand full of nails,
to impale ur behind
Getting into my head
Was not ingenious
Playing games for ur sick aim
Only stirred my beast within
Unleashed my wrath from the abyss
Now this pot of stew I'm brewing
Is just for you
A brilliant idea I figure
would be to include you !!!!!!!!
into the pot of stew
That's stewing just for you
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thanks Scrib, i am not a violent person. lol just that imagining him in the stew is so brilliant lol
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
raj
13 years 11 months ago
the venom very well expressed
the venom very well expressed...
Barbara Writes
13 years 11 months ago
Raj
Thanks for the read and comment
scribbler
13 years 11 months ago
Hi Barb
Expect the addressed person is lucky to not be In the stew lol........stan
Barbara Writes
13 years 11 months ago
Hi Scrib
yes he is.
i am glad you stop by for a read and comment. I appreciate it.
at times children who can't see behind blind eyes fill with love, certainly can find people that make you want to hurt them. letting off a bit of steam. lol
we can't live their life for them, gotta let them make their own mistakes.
Candlewitch
13 years 11 months ago
Dear Barbara
Whew! This is quite a decent vent!
by the way... I love the pic of you in the pretty dress!
always, Cat
Barbara Writes
13 years 11 months ago
Hey Cat
Thanks glad u like th pic
Appreciate the read and comment
weirdelf
13 years 11 months ago
a good write, potent.
I've got to say I really don't like the "ur" for "your", it's not colloquialism, it's bad spelling.
And what were you thinking with that coy bullshit "a^^"?
If you're going to kick ass, kick ass!
oh and !!!!!!!! is quite un-necessary, one ! is always enough.