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raj

Mar 27, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

precipitation

how good are the clouds
if they don't soak the land
with grey emotions
and clear the skies;
as do tears
lighten the heart, and
brighten the eyes.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

6 years 3 months ago

Kind of...

like eye wash for the brain. ~ Geezer.
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6 years 3 months ago

glad raj 4 u

you decided to return
the neopoets await you
serendipity is also back
have no fear about poetry
it's for all and free
compose good ones as you are capable of
I have noticed on AP

You are a poet lovely
Have NO FEAR of
partisan
here now no one reads me
so I post occasionally
only
but raj ur sub-lime

now become real lime

6 years 3 months ago

An awesome

return raj. Eloquent and fresh!
Keep them coming!

R

6 years 3 months ago

Thanks for reading

Actually I am not happy about it and shall be unpublishing it...

6 years 3 months ago

before you unpublish

raj should i remove my verbosity
you did not appreciate it
so it seems
I'm aware u don't like my comments
henceforth
none

R

6 years 3 months ago

has nothing to do with your

has nothing to do with your comment Lovedly..
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6 years 3 months ago

nice poem. I like the

nice poem. I like the comparison between the rain clearing the air and tears brightening the eyes.

R

6 years 3 months ago

thanks for reading

but I shall be un publishing this because I didn't like it myself...
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5 years 12 months ago

really

like your approach. to the point. a really good poem. glad you did not unpublish.