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Feb 08, 2025
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Productivity
Creativity.
Free flow of thoughts.
The sound
of music
and singing.
It's all part of
my life now.
The ability
to express
my thoughts.
The joy
in expressing them.
That's what
makes me productive.
The silence
in my mind.
The peace
in my soul.
It's all there now.
I'm so grateful
for these skills
newly learned
and constantly
activated.
Progressing
so nicely
so gently
so thoughtfully.
This sense of movement
makes me proud
of the way
I feel.
It provides
a flowing state
in my mind.
It gives me
a space,
a zone,
of freedom.
It is an area
in which I produce
profound
and pleasant
ideas.
Gives me
a sense
of possibility
and purpose.
This is the definition of
my productivity.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Despite the fact that I began this journey as a result of my grief, I now feel like writing poems has become, for me, like a tap I turn on to let my thoughts out. Post therapy session, I no longer feel the need to dwell too much on the grief or angst, but every now and then it does emerge. I am making a real attempt to talk about what I now call my new and different life, and there are many positive things to discuss creatively. I have a lot of positive things to say. When I focus on the creativity and productivity of this process of writing my poems, automatically the positive is demonstrated, as you can see in this particular poem.
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
neopoet
5 months ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Productivity" beautifully captures the essence of creativity and its impact on one's sense of productivity. The imagery of music, singing, and the free flow of thoughts conveys a sense of inspiration and joy in self-expression. The contrast between the silence in the mind and the peace in the soul highlights the importance of inner stillness in fostering creativity.
The poem effectively conveys the idea that creativity is a source of pride and fulfillment, providing a sense of purpose and possibility. The progression from gratitude for newly acquired skills to a state of gentle and thoughtful progress is well articulated. The use of words like "flowing state," "zone of freedom," and "profound and pleasant ideas" evokes a sense of creative abundance and productivity.
Overall, the poem successfully conveys the transformative power of creativity in one's life and the sense of fulfillment it brings. The structure and flow of the poem support its theme effectively, creating a sense of movement and progression that mirrors the creative process.
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Geezer
5 months ago
Hard...
to find fault with this. ~ Geez.
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