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Aug 08, 2012
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progressive poetry....Neopoets gift
BY JESS''''I wasn't pre-empting when I said recently your poetry is getting better.
I was right. I think you are putting more thought into it.''''''
You have shown me the right path
into that tunnel of darkness
I groped all life long
now I wouldn't let you go
for the remaining life
which ain't
I suppose is too long ...
I stand upon the pedestal of time
where I can be kicked anytime
by the long hands of the creator
which once sent me
across the universe
to promote
FREE VERSE...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
12 years 11 months ago
yes loved
i like this
nothing i would think to add or take away
love judy
xxx
loved
12 years 11 months ago
Thanks Judy
you too accept that .....
I have improved
and
am now worthy of being read ...
ere life does ebb..