Seren

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Prologue

Stillness
sheathed my need,
a gentle sheen
glistened your chest,
and my hands
yearned to reach
sliding my fingers
over your length.

But you beat me
with strokes on
the embonpoint,
tracing my navel
with the tips,
brushing my thighs
with your lips.

A rise of emotion
embodied my fervor
and flowed to surge,
as my mouth dried
limbs began to shake
this was the beginning
of a body quake

An arrow of want
pierced my inner core
I bowed in union,
riding its shaft
I slid into euphoria
with a gentle lift

And all this
was a preamble
the body of its story
has yet to come.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Comments

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Dearest Jayne

I am speechless with your choice of words and their usage to create imagery and mobility to make this a poetry in motion. Most importantly without making it look, feel or sound lewd. The title and the end lines are a perfect match and tantalizing to say the least. Certainly a Wow!

much love,

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

Hi Raj

I am so happy you liked it, thanks for the read and your thoughts they are always appreciated.

Wow huh ? Smile

Love and hugs JC xxx

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Yes, most definitely it is a

Yes, most definitely it is a smartly and delicately sculpted poem. But is this Prologue the right prescription for night? Yes & No. I guess it will depend on the reader. How about that for a comment? :)

It could leave the reader spellbound even after the read, though I am pretty sure there may not be a follow up write after the Prologue, leaving it to their imagination which is also very smart.

much love,

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

He he Raj !

(Is prologue the right description for 'night' ?) I never said in the poem it was night, I cant say anymore I am smiling ear to ear here and laughing you made my night !!

I am remaining quiet on whether there will be a sequel I am still mulling it over to be honest I started another poem and yeah I am still thinking on it ;)

I will let you know if I do post another chapter of this story

take care my friend love and hugs JC xxx

raj

11 years 5 months ago

Good to know it brought on

Good to know it brought on laughs for you. I didn't say "Is Prologue a right description for a night" I rather asked "is it the right prescription for a night" because I am quite certain the read would make it harder for the reader to sleep for a while....i can't give a clearer comment than that...lol...

You said you are likely to come out with a sequel? If so, all i can say is "Watch out Viagra"...he he he..

much love, have a wonderful laugh..

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

rotf !!!!

Oh god I had a blonde moment, I am going to shut up before I get myself into anymore trouble, bloody hell my face hurts from laughing, true.

I know what you mean now that as my fault, ok I am definably going to shut up now LOL !!

love and hugs my friend JC xxx

p.s. I have started another one I will see how it comes along and if I think its post worthy I will definitely let you know :)

Still laughing its very hard to type.....

alidzain

11 years 5 months ago

jc

Hey, that is one helluva sex poem that you have written!..love the way you put it into words.Congrats.This is a good job..
Keep on writing.

Alid

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

Dear Alid

This is just the lead up to the main event my friend just a taste of what may come ;)

Very glad you liked it thanks for your visit

love and hugs JC x

LorienLord

11 years 5 months ago

I really liked this but I am

I really liked this but I am not familiar with the word embonpoint....please elucidate. By the way you might not remember me...but here's a hint

One man's opinion
is another man's
Charmin.

Patrick

Thanx,

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

ello Patrick

Very long time no speak :) its good to see you here and I am very happy you liked this one, the meaning of embonpoint is this

embonpoint

/ˌɒmbɒ̃ˈpwã/

noun

noun: embonpoint; plural noun: embonpoints

1. the plump or fleshy part of a person's body, in particular a woman's bosom.
"the lady of a certain age and uncertain embonpoint wore strapless black lace kept up by sheer determination"

in this instance I meant a woman's bosom :)

I will be reading later on I will pay you a visit and see what you have been writing, Thanks for calling in :)

love JC xxx

Ian.T

11 years 5 months ago

Embonpoint

Embonpoint is a fancy way to talk about someone's curvy or plump figure..
This is one of those things I don't mind looking up LOL, Yours Ian.T

I have been in my cave having a cold shower and just don't want to talk about it I is sick of memories I can only smile at, La La

Seren

11 years 5 months ago

Ian

Thanks so much for the explanation of embonpoint, I expanded on it a little in my reply lol

and to your second part I can only say la la la la la la HAHA !! glad you ummm liked it yes ?

big smile much love always JC xxx