lou

Oct 29, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

PSEUDO

You’re a pseudo hero
a counterfeit lover
meagre soul undercover
the antagonist who enchants
in a mock romance.

You’re an apocryphal fool
playing the game of chance
fallacious in his charm.
delusive creature quick to abuse.
impassioned women are misused.

An imaginary Don Juan,
a bogus Casanova.
a quasi member of the human race,
you’re disgrace.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Comments

mona

14 years 11 months ago

This is Great write

you are a real great poet.

woow
amazing, and I really mean it.

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lou

14 years 11 months ago

hi

hi mona

thanks

lou

14 years 11 months ago

hi

thanks shirl me girl

lou

14 years 11 months ago

hi

thanks xena

lou

ziggy

14 years 11 months ago

hi there louise this is strong I don't understand this completly but thats my fault lol
you can explain it to me when we chat hope your well ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigs x
the first stanza is my fav its brill

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Zigs

Awww thanks mate , I'll explain it to ya lol

Lou

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Lol

Think we are both confused lol

Hugs Lou

judyanne

14 years 11 months ago

great write lou

did you mean 'you're A disgrace' for your last line?

love judy
xxxx

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Jude

Thank you. I'll correct that line.

Love Lou

Hooded Stranger

14 years 11 months ago

Lou

I was privy to this one before you posted it and I have to say this one grows on you. The first time you sent it to me, it was ok, but i wasn't dragged into it. I have read it maybe ten times since that first read and it gets better with each read...it is fast becoming one of my favourites of yours.

I also know a little of what inspired this write and you have hooked it perfectly!

you ain't 'alf bad ya know!

lou

14 years 11 months ago

HS

Thank you , your comments mean a lot to me.

Lou

CCfire

14 years 6 months ago

Reminds me

of some of the jerks on the 'other' site I used to be on lol..this is strong writing with a vivid message, some people need their butt kicked from here to sunday. Great write. :)

lou

14 years 6 months ago

Hi

There are way too many men like this, but I think there are a few that are not lol

Thank you for reading.

Lou

ziggy

14 years 6 months ago

hey there

this reads good this wordy piece
"You’re a pseudo hero
a counterfeit lover
meagre soul undercover
the antagonist who enchants
in a mock romance." like them lines for sure
up there with your best I reckon ,,,,,,,,,ziggy x