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PSYCH WARD
PSYCH WARD
The hollow breeze blows along the corridor
That still retains the faintest whiff of bleach
Another open door reveals an empty room
A ceiling striplight flicker offsets the gloom
Reflecting views that few had tried to teach
But now, there is nothing left here anymore
There are echoes of a past attempt at care
It’s like mental illness might no longer exist
One abandoned slipper, a mark on the wall
It just looks as if today, no-one cares at all
No plastic identity bands around the wrist
Out in the community, almost everywhere
An old hospital building in Victorian style
Extensive grounds that were all maintained
Sold off, community service at lower cost
Traditional views claim much has been lost
It’s independence, but what’s been gained
At least no bloodstain left on any white tile
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Leslie
7 months 2 weeks ago
PSYCH WARD
I just glad that this place is no longer operating and I thought that it was a great description with enough detail to give someone a fright. Great job! John