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Oct 18, 2014
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PUPPETS, BIRDS AND OTHER THIINGS ;EDIT
PUPPETS. BIRDS AND OTHER THINGS
I am a puppet on a string
a bird with a broken wing
floundering.
I can't dance or sing
with grace and dignity
as I used to. do.
But you will hear my truth
ring out in words golden. clear
and if you look carefully
you may see me standing there
for my heart and soul I bare.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
10 years 9 months ago
Geremia
you misspelled "birds" in the title.
Alid
Geremia
10 years 6 months ago
Correction done, Thanks. Joe
Correction done, Thanks.
Joe
Esker
10 years 6 months ago
illumination rounds
awareness shot up
and lit
the brilliant flare
falling down
falling stars
In short word lines
you say much
Truths
expression
Thank You!
Geremia
10 years 6 months ago
And Time is short, I was
And Time is short, I was blind-sided.
Thanks, my friend
Joe
Esker
10 years 6 months ago
Tell me about it!
Just here putting in peices..
"No one's perfect"
hell life aint..
I hear you my friend
Thank You!
Geremia
10 years 6 months ago
we r all off the same
we r all off the same assembly line, but there was no quality control.