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Aug 02, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022
PUPPY LOVE
PUPPY LOVE
Those dark eyes that stare lovingly up at me
Make me wish that I could make you mine
And just for this brief moment I will resign
But your affection is so very clear to see
Holding you close, albeit seen as wrong
I sense your warm breath as I breathe in
And as you push so softly against my skin
I’m sad that to someone else you belong
It’s a shame that we’ve not met before
And after today we’ll go separate ways
But both look back as if the moment stays
You’re such a special glossy black Labrador
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Ooooh...
one of my favorite breeds! [I had a half-breed, Black Lab and Belgian Shepard] My sister had the mother [Black Lab.]
Anyway, I see by the way you write about this puppy, that you are dog-lover. That makes a point for you in my book!
I don't have any crticisms for you. Your rhyme-scheme is great and a great story! Good job! Welcome to Neo.
~ Geezer.
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