Rula

Jan 18, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This poem is part of the challenge:

January 2023 Challenge Push Me 🏆 Winner

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Push Me

I am the emperor of my empire
‘his majesty, the king’
‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,

I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the illumination that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Rula,

I love how it is all interconnected. a beautiful job!

*hugs, Cat

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you dearest Cat

It's been just a thought. I hope I don't sound like bragging or so. It's what the title of the contest inspires.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting dear

Words.unwritten

2 years 5 months ago

Self motivation should be the

Self motivation should be the only motivation.... and we all should give ourselves a little push at times

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you

Totally agree. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

Nice flex

Astounding. I have some suggestions.

I am the emperor of my empire
the ‘his majesty, the king’
and ‘her majesty the Queen’
I am the warrior in my
Life's battle-field,

I am the twilight of my dawn
and my own sky star,
the (illumination) that
motivates me
and the motivation that
inspires
and when there's no one
to give me a push
I tell I
"push me".

That might strengthen a strong poem,
Stupendous,
Tim

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Thank you Tim

For reading and the suggestion. I implemented as suggested.I’m happy you like my poem.

Lavender

2 years 5 months ago

Push Me

Hello, Rula,
A great idea for this theme. Bold! I'm not certain "the" and "and" are necessary in the second and third lines, but I understand the reason for using them. A wonderful inspiring read!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

I’ll second that

Good eyes. Or ears. Or mind’s ear I suppose. But yes, I’ll agree to that.

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

Dearest Lav and Tim

Always wonderful to hear from you .Your on spot suggestions are taken and implemented. Can’t thank you enough friends.