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Edward nigma
Edward nigma
Jun 26, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Puzzle pieces

People are not like
Pictures they were never
meant to be painted
Into perfection .
For what i am
what we are
Are pieces to
an unfinished
puzzle .
and we yearn to
find the final
face that puts all
our pieces into place.
The one hand
you can hold
and the only one who
will understand.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde , William Wordsworth

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Michael Anthony

Michael Anthony

4 years ago

Thanks for sharing Hayden!

Thanks for sharing Hayden! Love the last few lines quite a bit:

we yearn to
find the final
face that puts all
our pieces into place.
The one hand
you can hold
and the only one who
will understand.

Well done!

Cheers

Geezer

Geezer

4 years ago

I do believe...

this is one of your best!
The only thing I would change is the
line that says: "For we yearn..." I would use: And we yearn. ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma

Edward nigma

4 years ago

Thank you

It’s been hard to write because for months I’ve been having chronic nerve pain on the whole right side of my head because of the brain surgeries .

Geezer

Geezer

4 years ago

I'm sorry to hear...

of your troubles, hang in there, Can't wait to see what you are capable of when you are not in pain. ~ Geez.
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