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Quest ...your eyes......

Quest to see
your eyes......

I have seen many eyes
they speak nothing
but the truth

mine speak of love and youth..
my eyes
I thought were beautiful,
till I saw in her eyes so blue...
so lovely and so sparkingly true

the babe was tromping about...
as if in ones youth
the pet had eyes blue
better than mine
how glad I am
all now knew.
our eyes are blue

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 1 month ago

Loved

A quietly good piece, have I read this one before ???
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T

loved

loved

11 years 1 month ago

Yes I think so

pending for a week
hanging or drowning in the stream
which?/

S

scribbler

11 years 1 month ago

Hi loved

Excellent use of rhyme in a free form poem. The end kinda fades out though..............stan

loved

loved

11 years 1 month ago

rivers of freedom have ripples

they rise and fall like empires
but the end none can control

neither you nor I

the fading life
must endure
what is there to ensure????