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Oct 17, 2022
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Quickening
It is in the morning stillness
Before the first light brushes the clouds
During the night song’s final reprise
I find myself and find myself again
Immersed in a crepuscular chorus
Permeating the depths of my soul
With endless manifestations of love
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Quickening
Good morning, Tim,
Stunning. So peaceful and calm, I feel as if, simply being here reading, I am intruding on your extraordinary, beautiful moment. Well captured!
Thank you,
L
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
Before...
the daylight shift begins, and the nighttime loses control; there is that perfect moment, a time when reflection is paramount.
A wish to express our love for the world without distraction. Nice stuff! I am always inspired by your work; I will take as much as you give, and sometimes more! Thank you. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
2 years 8 months ago
There is something
About the early hours of the morning. There is a certain peace and calm. You have captured that beautifully, as always.
Jackweb
2 years 8 months ago
Yes!
Such day is my creative and productive moment of life.. When serenity and calmness takes the shade there is obvious awakening of inspiration.
Nice job!
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