R a i s e

speak not the name
for the dead hear
and stir gentle
in the wake

but raise the oars
soft on hallowed
lake

and gentle
for the shore
make

About This Poem

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

Esker

14 years 4 months ago

Viking

I of viking heritage
north scotland
and ojibway
the spiritual fires

the lore of the lake

thank you for you consideration
I like your changes

thank you

whitetea

14 years 4 months ago

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shalom

Geezer

14 years 4 months ago

Amen...

The prayer we all utter, when we are alone with our grief. I like the changes too. Nothing else to add. ~ Gee