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Feb 10, 2016
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r u living in the now
living in the now
you can live
only in the now,
now
yesterday has gone
as a wow
tomorrow may come
but
not ever as a tomorrow
but again another now
so remember
the now
and
live it as you may
some how
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
9 years 5 months ago
Loved,
Just wait a while I shall catch up or slow down, but either way, I walk with you.
Yours as always Ian..
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
thanks
now ur
slow man
Geremia
9 years 5 months ago
As I write this and ty[e one
As I write this and ty[e one letter then the next I have slipped out of present into past.
Good write, my friend
joe
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
we all admire
your diligence and persistence
glad Richards helps u
good friends r hard to find
keep it FRESH in mind
Sir Joe
alidzain
9 years 5 months ago
loved
if this poem's title is a question, I'll answer yes. Love the last stanza
Alid.
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
couldn't follow u
whats ur QS ?
alidzain
9 years 5 months ago
loved
if the title of this poem is added a question mark at the end, I'll answer "yes".
Alid
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
No need
poetry and grammar
have no glamour
it's just your understanding
man
amen
Geremia
9 years 5 months ago
Alid, my friend. I was taught
Alid, my friend. I was taught not to use question marks in poetry. Prose grammar generally does not apply. :)
joe
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
Joe
Thank you for the rescue
I keep telling all
ur a great poet
they may listen
Geremia
9 years 5 months ago
SEE BLOG
SEE BLOG
raj
9 years 5 months ago
Good one Lovedly...short and
Good one Lovedly...short and succinct..
Regards,
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
thank u regds
kind u passed by
happy valentiny