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Mar 10, 2014
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Racism
Reign of hatred spreading discrimination
Anger, uncontrolled is a blind beast unleashed
Cold is the heart which does not know the value of love
In the soul, corruption is a disease
Sum it all up from the top and see what you get....
Madness lingering in the minds of mortals
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
11 years 4 months ago
Alid
An excellent Acrostic I wonder how others would write the same with that word, Yours Ian.T