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May 14, 2025
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Rain City Rondo
Soggy gray skies
Been hanging 'round this week
Puddle-jumpin’s gettin’ old
My mind’s gettin’ kinda moldy
It’s like a bad case of headcheese
I'm talkin’ about baby
Lately the day's grind
Winds
On into the night
Nothin’ feels right
There's nothing but bad news
And I still haven't got used
To you gone
So I think I'll just sit here
And hum me a new tune
Somethin’ blue and lazy
I know you think I'm crazy
But I don't care
I care so much about you
Been crying my eyes out
Without you
It's gettin’ so my eyes
Are like
Soggy gray skies
About This Poem
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1 month 2 weeks ago
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Lavender
1 month 1 week ago
Rain City Rondo
Hello, Richard,
I feel the blues here, feel those soggy gray skies. You got the blues, Baby!
Well done!
L
Richard Milne
1 month 1 week ago
Thank you Lavender
Always grateful when people take the time to read and comment. Best wishes to you...