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Oct 13, 2011
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Rain of Songs
Rain Of songs..
What force is this that carries a
heart’s intentions into uncertain moments?
could a lover’s attention ever waver afore
a persons unkind comments?. I say in this
state the heart does not stutter but surges
forth scattering all such thoughts of speech
amid the clutter for on this journey there
is a rain of songs and the true heart can
be lifted by notes to heights,
where it belongs..
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
13 years 9 months ago
Thank you,
Thank you Jane, your comments are greatly appreciated. Please take care Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Lane
13 years 9 months ago
Thank you,
Thank you Lonnie i'm glad you liked this and your comments are high praise indeed. Regards Roscoe...