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Oct 13, 2011
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Rain of Songs
Rain Of songs..
What force is this that carries a
heart’s intentions into uncertain moments?
could a lover’s attention ever waver afore
a persons unkind comments?. I say in this
state the heart does not stutter but surges
forth scattering all such thoughts of speech
amid the clutter for on this journey there
is a rain of songs and the true heart can
be lifted by notes to heights,
where it belongs..
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
14 years ago
Thank you,
Thank you Jane, your comments are greatly appreciated. Please take care Love Roscoe...
Roscoe Lane
14 years ago
Thank you,
Thank you Lonnie i'm glad you liked this and your comments are high praise indeed. Regards Roscoe...