The Rainbow

After the rain comes the sun and the Rainbow After hard times there come the good times Like the colours of the Rainbow Violet Blue Yellow Orange Life has many aspects good and bad They say at the end of the Rainbow is a pot of gold So they say So also in life there is abundance of goodness if one can find it

Eulekia

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Dear fellow Neopoets after you have read my poem, please send me a message of your views of the poem. Send the message of your views of my poem to my email address which is ifeanyiiweze@yahoo.com I will recieve it Eulekia

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria, NGA

Favorite Poets: William Shakespear, William Morris

Comments

Eulekia

7 years 11 months ago

The Rainbow

I want to know your opinions about my poem from fellow Neopoets.

Eulekia

Scatterhatter

7 years 11 months ago

They way you wrote this

They way you wrote this
Is like prose but
Who's to say that's poetry
I think the rainbows know....

jane210660

7 years 11 months ago

Hi Eulekia and welcome to Neopoet

We use this site to offer critique on each other's work, not private email addresses, so you will find other's thoughts here on this thread.
I like the ideas you are expressing very much, but this is written as prose and would benefit from setting out differently. I've re worked it for you to show you what I mean.

After the rain comes the sun
and the Rainbow.
After hard times there come the good times,
like the colours of the Rainbow: Violet, Blue, Yellow, Orange.
Life has many aspects good and bad.
They say at the end of the Rainbow is a pot of gold,
so they say.
So also in life there is abundance of goodness
if one can find it.

Cheers Jane