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Mar 06, 2023
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Rainbow Mountains
Once covered with ice
Red ,white,gold, blue, ground appears
Revealing God’s work
— Clentin, Mar 06, 2023
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Mr joghe
3 years 3 months ago
Dear poet,
Dear poet,
I like your three lines poem.
Clentin Martin
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you. I appreciate you
Thank you. I appreciate you comments
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years 3 months ago
Nice!
Cool title. Good Haiku. Sneaking the colors in that 7 syllable line was a good choice. It is a classical Haiku in that we’ve got the theme of nature and a “cutting” word.
Tim
Clentin Martin
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you. I now see that the
Thank you. I now see that the Andes mountain chain is now colored since the ice has melted
RoseBlack
3 years 3 months ago
Nice imagery
Rainbows are surely a beautiful sight and imagining them in mountain form gives off such amazing imagery.
Clentin Martin
3 years 3 months ago
Thank you. There are the
Thank you. There are the rainbow mountains in Peru that are real and can now be seen after the ice had melted
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