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Rainbow (Rhapsody)
Co-written with Words.Unwritten
If you could listen to the colors
And if you could see the sounds
You would hear the rainbow
And see how my heart pounds
Each time that our eyes meet
And as I hear your voice
A colorful fountain of harmony
Erupts without a choice
Blue collides with yellow
Yellow blends to red
Kindles warmth within my heart
And hope inside my head
You brought my colours back
Now my soul’s no longer black
Beheld the beauty of my song
When all the others saw it wrong.
Red is the beating of my heart
Orange are sweet sunsets
Moon is yellow on the rise
Are we green with envy yet?
Blue as clearest summer skies
That fade to indigo
Purple and violet blanket holds
The stars in your eyes so here we go
Silver chased with gold
When my stories all unfold
At last my life feels whole
You reached in and touched my soul
You clung to every word
the sweetest song of the freest bird.
You saw my colors and heard my song
All the others heard it wrong
Red is the beating of my heart
Orange are sweet sunsets
Moon is yellow on the rise
Are we green with envy yet?
Blue as clearest summer skies
That fade to indigo
Purple and violet blanket holds
The Stars in your eyes so here we go
I was frightened and alone
And then you came to me
With love and understanding
As deep and mighty as the the sea
You turned my life around
Heard my colors, saw my sounds
You compliment me and my song
Everyone had done it wrong
And and you saw it all along
I paint a rainbow with my song
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A fairly comprehensive addendum to a beautiful poem by Words.unwritten. This is already being recorded as a song for release as a single. Pretty exciting.
Review Request Direction:
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Words.unwritten
3 years ago
I love our changes ❤️ and
I love our changes ❤️ and excited x x