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Oct 24, 2022
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Realizations in the Darkness
My tears became so numerous
They sat like stars in the northern sky
Suspended in the moonless black oblivion of depression
It was there I sat, wearing my cloak of despair
Pondering all things great and small
Under their dim but twinkling light
When realizations became manifest and
The fires of self love were rekindled
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Celso G. Tertins
2 years 8 months ago
Although our circumstances
Although our circumstances may be different, i feel this poem slides like a puzzle piece in some moments of my life. same shape although of a different pattern.