Neopoet Weekly 05/04/25 to 05/10/25

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The Recipe

Her eyes, without fail,
always hinted at mornings,
around 10am, with French toast
on a tray ready to be enjoyed.

It took some time,
but I was fortunate to find someone
who’s look could cook like that.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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1 month 2 weeks ago

Nice Mike!
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1 month 2 weeks ago

Thank you amigo! Hope you are well.

Best

1 month 2 weeks ago

morning eyes:)
Smiles... very clever

p s. Who's ....should it be whose?

1 month 2 weeks ago

Perfect, yes. Thanks for commenting Rula (I cannot kiss and tell - LOL!).