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Jun 15, 2011
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redesigning life
we have persevered
along stormy paths
felt the crunch
of indecision underfoot
seen wonders bloom
a kaleidoscope of color
but this is. . .
the summer of change
against a backdrop of clear azure skies
we have embraced winter's choice
released uncertainty on a breeze
watched the beginning of another life
amble along a walkway toward tomorrow
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Comments
CCfire
14 years 1 month ago
*checks to see if Theo
*checks to see if Theo followed...no? Ok All clear...lol...I like the fact you actually wrote something at last!! :P
I can sense the wanderlust returning but it's been there a while now..*hugs*
49reasons
14 years 1 month ago
wanderlust
Yes, wanderlust has always been there but I keep it well hidden for the most part. *hug*