REFLECTION

and through the looking glass
I crept
to see the other side of me
all spells broken

and into a darkness
I fell
like Lucifer in his hell
for what the years
had truly taken

but despair finds its hope
somewhere
and what has been
by Time forsaken
is in Time forgotten

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Joe

You that worries of an afterlife or whatever and fears returning to your God, all I can say is, know yourself and judge the things you have done, are they balanced in the favour of good, then you should have no fear, Yours Ian.T

loved

12 years 3 months ago

you have a way

to bring about the stress in your thought
as Ian does say
but carry on
with words do play

Geremia

12 years 3 months ago

Thank u both for supporting

Thank u both for supporting me.

Ian, I wrote this for someone who is going through a bad time.

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Joe

I have become use to a lot of poets asking of the future in their words, I missed you asking for someone who is having a bad time..
Please forgive but I think my reply belongs to many.
Take care Joe and walk with Grace, Yours Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 2 months ago

Joe

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Take care Joe and walk with Grace, Yours Ian.T