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Apr 01, 2020
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rekindled memories
I remember
a long walk down a boardwalk
the wind blew cold
long blonde hair obscured my view
There was warmth in your smile
a soft urgency in your touch
and you were beautiful
so how was I to know
there was another
and I was left to play
the fool
after giving all of my heart and soul
I think of you still
and remember
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
5 years 3 months ago
Nothing to add...
You did a fine job of making me feel the sorrow of understanding that a person's intentions can be misconstrued. It's happened to me. ~ Geezer.
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c lynn brooks
5 years 2 months ago
Gee
Thank you so much for reading
they just weren't what they seemed