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Feb 15, 2026
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Remains of the Season
such snow melts away!
left behind are washed-out thoughts
rivers overflow
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Close to a foot of snow, all melting within a few days
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 months ago
My feelings...
exactly! I am so through with winter, yet living in the Great Northeast...
Nicely done, Lavender.
Geez.
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Lavender
2 months ago
Hello, Geezer!
We've had several days with above average temps, and several more days of warmer temps in the forecast. What once was over a foot of snow is melting fast! The rivers and creeks are full - make way for the row boats! :)
I have to remind myself that winter plays tricks on us almost every year. But I wouldn't mind if we parted ways with Winter early this year.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
L
Wallyroo92
1 month 3 weeks ago
Remains of the Season
There's power in brevity, left open to interpretation and meaning.
Well done.
Lavender
1 month 3 weeks ago
Thank you!
I'm always grateful for your input!
L