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Remember Me Pop

Hi Pop

I have composed many
Moms’ poems
on dad
perhaps only one

but your dad
I would love to salute
and
add what a charming one
he has produced in you
as a loving son

Dads have to be outwardly harsh
spare the rod and spoil the child

all moms love sons and daughters
but from harsh treatment
they shy away

and

How I wish I had a dad like yours
would he care to bless me
kindly ask
for me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Simon

Simon

6 years 2 months ago

Hi lovely

It's been a long time
Well that's a good one there "spare the rod and spoil the child" though is a choice any way thanks for that piece of poem.

lovedly

lovedly

6 years 2 months ago

well well well

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