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Mar 15, 2026
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Remembering Mom
Today I rose with thoughts of above
Remembering the person I really love
Today my thoughts move back in time
Remembering my Mom so true and fine
I wish she were here so I could say
I’m sorry rather than just think and pray
I now can clearly recount my early days
And how I should have had more praise
As a parent I can now see my family grow
And understand how my love should flow
My awakened thoughts cause me to care
To remember how I should be more fair
Happy Birthday is my hopeful wish for you
Thank you for your love that was so true
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A women to remember
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sen99
1 month 1 week ago
Hello Clentin
I agree with the your poem, a nice sentiment, this helps me remember my mum too
All Best
Sen99
Clentin Martin
1 month 1 week ago
Thank you for your comments…
Thank you for your comments. Moms,wife’s, are those women we honor.
|Eliza
3 weeks 5 days ago
A beautiful sonnet to honor your mum.
It's great that you have such fond memories of her. Family is truly the best thing.
Clentin Martin
3 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you for your kind…
Thank you for your kind comments!