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03/26 In Honor Of Women

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Remembering Mom

Today I rose with thoughts of above
Remembering the person I really love

Today my thoughts move back in time
Remembering my Mom so true and fine

I wish she were here so I could say
I’m sorry rather than just think and pray

I now can clearly recount my early days
And how I should have had more praise

As a parent I can now see my family grow
And understand how my love should flow

My awakened thoughts cause me to care
To remember how I should be more fair

Happy Birthday is my hopeful wish for you
Thank you for your love that was so true

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A women to remember

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Sen99

Sen99

1 month 1 week ago

Hello Clentin

I agree with the your poem, a nice sentiment, this helps me remember my mum too

All Best

Sen99