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Sep 06, 2022
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Remind Me Again
Reminders of a life once lived
a life of you
a life of sin
Do you feel me in your bones?
Do you see me in your skin?
Sink my teeth into your bloody woes
and be devoured by my love within.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 10 months ago
Intense
I love how you combined such intense emotions into a short verse. Excellent use of language and flow.
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