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Mar 23, 2011
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Renaissance
Spring, wakes
shakes her head,
salutes the sun,
washes her face
in the dew of the morning
stretching her arms
she embraces
the new day, it's
a good day
for a rebirth.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I feel awake :) it's such a glorious day here today xxx
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
faerybeki
14 years 3 months ago
Ian, I always love your
Ian, I always love your comments, thank you :) I often drive passed Heywood (it was Heywood I think?) and always think of you. Much love Beki xxx ps I have it on good authority that the white horse misses you too :) x
Nordic cloud
14 years 3 months ago
Rebirth lovely one.
Hello Beki,
I like the spring awakening and shaking its head,
the tassels of the catkins shaking too their pollen
of rebirth onto the world renewed.
Happy to hear your spring song Beki
Love from Ann of N.
faerybeki
14 years 3 months ago
Dear Ann, you comment is a
Dear Ann, you comment is a poem of it's own, another song to Spring :) It's wonderful when the world starts waking up again! So happy to see You Ann, much love Beki xxx
faerybeki
14 years 3 months ago
Hello lovely :) this one
Hello lovely :) this one skipped out lol at the time I thought it was weak but I'm not sure I want to change anything now :) love you xxx