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Nov 13, 2018
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(repost) shadow
I wish I was as pretty as my shadow
I wish I was as easy to hide
I wish it was easy to tell the truth
and harder to tell that I lied.
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weirdelf
6 years 6 months ago
Good one.
Hits a few home truths for quite a few people I think.
You have talent, it needs work but it is there. That is why I got so furious with you about the last poem of yours I commented on.