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Jan 04, 2016
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REQUIEM
REQUIEM
We are frail and faulted creatures
each of us set to implode as designed
never to know, when, where or why,
subjected to a random act of violence
of Time in medias res...
but we are feeling creatures
of a tender heart and a knowing mind,
interlocking souls whose spirits intertwine
and when one of us dies, a part of us
must die too..
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
9 years 6 months ago
Joe
A very apt write as we drift into another day.
Take care and never fear what tomorrow brings,
Yours, Ian..
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
we all need to find peace in
we all need to find peace in ourselves and through each other.
joe
Sparrow
9 years 6 months ago
Joe.
I am here always,
maybe one day just in Spirit, but we will know that in the light, we shall be able to talk in words or think.
If you are in need then we are here to give, if you don't need we are here to share.
Take care young traveller, the journey will become beautiful, but who dares to say when,
Yours, as always, Ian
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
I truly hope to meet you on
I truly hope to meet you on the other side--if there is one.
joe
lovedly
9 years 6 months ago
but I'd love to meet you here ...Poet Joe---- come over here
WELCOME TO THE COLDEST REGION
Temperatures here minus 11 degrees Celsius
but feels like minus 20 degrees
with wind-chill
come along you will have coffee with me
cold still cappuccino
for 3 dollars only..(for you Joe will be two and free)
iced not in snow
but fridge
Loved welcomes the poet fraternity
at twenty minutes passed midnight
to feel the minus 30 chill
bring a blanket or woolen quilt...
If you are not strong built
Joe I will lend you don't worry
Geremia
9 years 6 months ago
Wish I could. Am housebound./
Wish I could. Am housebound./
thanks,:) joe
Roscoe Lane
9 years 6 months ago
So,
So very true my friend, Regards Roscoe...