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Jul 20, 2011
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requiem for a poem
i left them again
words spread like honey
sticking to my image
these dreams come
and i am shattered
you speak me
and i am silenced
Avalokiteśvara looks down
tangled in grape vines
i am crushed
drunk
with poems
i bear no gifts
no regrets
no sorrow
i am wordless
in a world gone mad.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Kailashana2
14 years ago
Thanks, Rosie.. Much
Thanks, Rosie.. Much appreciated.
I read and reread my poem and never noticed it. I must have changed it from the singular to the plural and then forgot to remove the *a* this morning...
~A