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raj

Sep 23, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Resemblance

Connect with the rhythm of nature,
in its moods we discover
shades of life
in all their true colors
resembling mine and thine

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

10 years 9 months ago

Raj

a nice short one.Thank you for sharing.

Alid

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10 years 9 months ago

Alid

Thank you for the read. Good to know you liked it.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

beautiful

and
friend Ian will say
hey bard
how another one has been born

mine or thine
then divine thou and thy
and why not
why!

R

10 years 9 months ago

Lovedly

You may have read Ian's response to your comment lol. Thank you for the read and your comment.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

Yeah

he keeps me /us humoured else poetry may become boring

10 years 9 months ago

raj

hey bard, how another one has been born, mine or thine
then divine thou and thy, and why not "I"
Hey loved is becoming psychic,
well I never would have thought it.
There was me thinking he was as straight laced as the rest,
Now he dabbles in those realms of spirits.
Your write Joined in with the expression of think in colours, well done, though maybe a little to simplistic,
I shall have to send a seeker to Loved he is hearing things that I have not said lol,
Yours as always Ian.T

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10 years 9 months ago

Ian

Thank you for the visit and your comment. "Simplistic"?...honestly i had never looked at it that way. Now that you say it, it does appear to be simplistic to me. But so is the message too I tried to convey through this poem, isn't it?

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

raj

I have probably been hearing the old time religionists shouting out, this is fine as the others say, though would like a little more conviction in the overall message,
Yours as always Ian.T

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10 years 9 months ago

Ian

Noted your observation, though honestly I am unable to comprehend what exactly made you feel it lacks conviction.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

Yes like it,

Yes like it a lot, succinct and very accurate. Regards Roscoe..

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10 years 9 months ago

Roscoe

Many thanks for your time and visit and read. Very much appreciate your comment on this poem.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

Hi Raj

Succinct and enjoyable.

Cheers

R

10 years 9 months ago

Thanks Leonard for your

Thanks Leonard for your comment.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

Raj

I especially loved the last five lines...I guess this means that I like it all.
Beautiful!

R

10 years 9 months ago

Rula

Thanks for stopping by and your comment. Good to know you liked it.

Regards,

10 years 9 months ago

The color of us...

[Meaning]; Colors what and how we see, so that we become the color from the inside-out. ~ Gee

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10 years 9 months ago

Thanks gee for your time,

Thanks gee for your time, read and comment.

Regards,