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Feb 18, 2012
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Restless
Restless is the storm fed ocean
Where she has left a bounty
There upon the shore
But seagulls will not venture
Knowing where the danger lies
If the truth be pure and simple
They'll be no need for alibis
The wind is high and wild
fires sweep the land
as I stare out my window
My coffee cup in hand
A wry smile upon my face
for I now understand
The story is from times of old
over and over it has been told
and oh, by the way
my coffee's gone cold
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Comments
Starlight
13 years 5 months ago
this is beautiful.
this is beautiful.
China Blue
13 years 5 months ago
Star
Many Thanks
and welcome to Neopoet
Chrys
China Blue
13 years 4 months ago
Lon
Thank you muchly. didn't you know that I am in the amazing business?
Candlewitch
13 years 4 months ago
Dear Chrys,
Excellent! I love seeing things from your viewpoint!
always, Cat
China Blue
13 years 4 months ago
Cat
awww thank you
weirdelf
13 years 4 months ago
Delightful!
You have used language, imagery and meaning to produce a really fine poem. Sorry, I have no crit, except I am jealous!
Your wordcrafting is superb.
China Blue
13 years 4 months ago
Jess
Thank you