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Apr 11, 2025
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Resurrection of Christ
Joyful music is all a glow with Sorrow in the midst of happiness.
Our Lord died on the cross to save us from our sins.
On Good Friday they nailed Him on the cross and crowned Him with many thorns.
Mary weeping as her Son was laid upon her lap.
He was buried with swaddling cloth to wrap His incense body.
Three days on Easter morning the rock was removed and the cloths unwrapped.
Jesus has risen on this Easter morn.
Songs of Alleluia and Gloria Ave fills the air with exciting sounds of praise.
Our Lord Jesus has Risen.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Appreciate any comments.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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2 months 2 weeks ago
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Candlewitch
2 months 2 weeks ago
Hello Mary,
Would you PLEASE STOP hitting the (send/enter/SAVE) button TWICE when you post a poem? You must exercise patience... ONCE is enough to put it on the stream.
thank you, Candlewitch/Cat
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Mary Derringer
2 months 1 week ago
Candlewitch Cat
I realize I did this today when I was posting my poem. What happened is I lost the page I was submitting my poem and couldn't find it. I realized I had submitted it twice.I am very sorry about this. I lost the poem and had to restart it.Thank you for your comments
Candlewitch
2 months 1 week ago
Dear Mary,
I am so sorry that you lost the poem you were trying to post! It is such a bad feeling a person is left with! This is why I write my poems on (Notepad) first and copy them from there! If I can help you in any way, please let me know?
always, Cat
Mary Derringer
2 months 1 week ago
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Cat, I always write my poem on a notepad and do a rough draft then I rewrite it but my computer went to another screen and I lost it after I had already copied it
Mary