loved

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Return to Me

Return to me the smiles
You took away

Return to me the tears
I shed anyway

And

Return to me if you must today,
The same way you did
When we made love last Saturday

Or return to my life
The same old way,
Else return all the love
Which I gave away

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Candlewitch

13 years 10 months ago

Dear Loved,

I very much enjoyed reading this sad yet hopeful piece. Very well written.

Or return to my life
The same old way,
Else return all the love
I gave away.

always, Cat

loved

13 years 10 months ago

Dear Cat

You add spice to my life,
and
I can only but thank you...
Please come by whenever
spare time, if any
is with you.

scribbler

13 years 10 months ago

hi loved

Abit different style for you. I like this. You could try : When we made love last Saturday
and which I gave away and see if you like it............stan

loved

13 years 10 months ago

EXPERIENCE and Perception

Of seasoned players does count.
Stan,
Each poem of mine is
abs...
DIFFERENT

loved

13 years 10 months ago

you undoubtedly are

my great unique poetic friend
who has a thought of her own
always...
keep it up
twill help

loved

13 years 10 months ago

once again thanks

you encourage me also thanks tc

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

Simple and effective.

A fine poem.

What is happening with you?
Your poetry is leaping and bounding into quality.

loved

13 years 10 months ago

ur

the sole source of my leaping,
sir thanks to u
i should have listened to u earlier.